IN PRAISE OF WOMEN OF SUBSTANCE - poem

Post by **WIZARD** » Sat Jun 03, 2006 11:11 pm

IN PRAISE OF WOMEN OF SUBSTANCE

As I lay here dreaming,
Forming pictures in my mind.
I conjured up a lady fair,
Sweet natured, warm and kind.

I see this creature as I dream,
With all her charms most proud.
Her tempting eyes beholding me,
And teases me aloud.

A temptress she, would beckon me,
Provocative and beguiling.
Her rounded form to tempt me more,
Her bewitching spell in smiling.

Curvaceous; sensual and arousing,
Ti's her loveliness appealing.
Drunk with excitement I would be,
In ample arms concealing.

Seductive nights I'd lay with her,
Voluptuous breasts alluring.
Plentiful and comforting,
My passion's lust procuring.

Reuben's brush with skill to paint,
Abundant women's form.
Could not have captured her so fair,
A perfect female born.

Attractive and enticing,
though substantial she may be.
As Venus overflowing,
My goddess is to me.

Aphrodite too, her merits had.
Deity of love divine.
But my lovely living version ,
A Woman of Substance, forever mine.

Composed by Wizard for Luxor4U 04/06/2006

Post by **HEPZIBAH** » Sat Jun 03, 2006 11:55 pm

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[face=Comic Sans MS]Wiz you are a wonder and a poet too,
You've accepted the challenge, so it's biscuits with tea for you.

What a wonderful Wiz you are.

[/face]

Post by **WIZARD** » Sun Jun 04, 2006 12:15 am

Thank you Hepzi, I'm glad you liked this poem and I'm pleased it made you happy. I hope others like it too.

Post by **tut bar dancer** » Sun Jun 04, 2006 12:49 am

Wiz that is a lovely poem i really enjoyed it Thanx

Post by **Trixx** » Sun Jun 04, 2006 9:06 am

Keep it up Wiz

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Post by **WIZARD** » Sun Jun 04, 2006 9:57 am

Oooo Trixx, what DO you mean

Post by **Trixx** » Sun Jun 04, 2006 10:39 am

Now Now Wiz

:oops:;);):lol:

Post by **WIZARD** » Sun Jun 04, 2006 11:03 am

Careful sunshine, or I might just end up writing a poem about you.

Post by **Kiya** » Sun Jun 04, 2006 11:19 am

I really enjoyed your poem Wiz, keep em coming

Post by **niletraveller** » Sun Jun 04, 2006 2:47 pm

Thank you for a lovely poem.
Hope you don't mind if I print it and frame it?

Post by **WIZARD** » Sun Jun 04, 2006 8:05 pm

I'm so pleased you think my work good enough to print and frame NT. I am truly flattered.

Post by **PRchick** » Sun Jun 04, 2006 8:17 pm

That's really beautiful, Wiz. No wonder all the ladies like you.

Post by **WIZARD** » Sun Jun 04, 2006 8:21 pm

Thank you PR. You're very kind.

Post by **sue** » Sun Jun 04, 2006 10:02 pm

That was a wonderful poem Wiz I love the way your poems unfold and take me on a journey of feeling filled with images.

Post by **WIZARD** » Mon Jun 05, 2006 6:30 am

What a lovely description of my work Sue. Your insight is remarkable. Thank you.

Post by **FABlux** » Tue Jun 06, 2006 9:22 pm

That is a wonderful poem Wiz. I hope you don't mind me passing it on to a friend as well, it is too good not to share? :tu:

Post by **little_angel_204** » Tue Jun 06, 2006 9:46 pm

Really nice poem wiz

Post by **Phantom** » Wed Jun 07, 2006 1:40 pm

Wow Wiz, I didn't realise that you actually wrote it !

Post by **HEPZIBAH** » Sat May 31, 2008 2:04 pm

[face=Comic Sans MS]As 'Women of Substance' are quite topical again on another thread I thought I resurrect this poem of Wiz's. It was commisioned at a time when we larger ladies were getting a bit of a bashing on the forum somewhile ago. [/face]

Post by **WIZARD** » Sat May 31, 2008 3:59 pm

WIZARD wrote:IN PRAISE OF WOMEN OF SUBSTANCE

I wrote this poem for Hepzi, at her request, and now, reading it again two years, I wouldn't change a word.

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